Picture Perfect:
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OH MY GOD FLUFFINESS KILLS!

Anyway, these are coming out so slowly… Sorry everyone!

I hope this is good for such a long wait… Well, who am I kidding? this sucks for such a long wait! TT____TT

Hinata's handing him is shirt... sorry for not clarifying ^^

I’m not proud of the first panel… but I do think it was necessary… the first few were to establish the relationship between Hinata and her son, Nudoru... (AGH! OEDIPUS COMPLEX A-BREWIN'.... no never DX)... I think it’s cute. ^^ At least the third panel is. >.> In the second panel... I couldn't figure out how to make Hinata's hair look like she was looking down and to the side... oh well D:

OH MY LORD NARUTO HAS NO FACE! D8.... sorry

Then Naruto comes in all schneaky-like… BUT I COULD NOT FOR THE LIFE OF ME FIGURE OUT WHAT HE SHOULD SAY!... Even with *ihatecollege’s help… which helped a lot (Thanks so much, Ms. Oh! ^^)… but even so, his line here was a Beeotch. I just didn’t want it to sound like a song lyric. D8 I just wanted to make the point that he loves Hinata, and I’ve heard or gotten the impression that a mother and her child are a lovely thing to see (if the kid isn’t pooping or something >.> ) especially for a father… but who knows… I have very little experience in that department seeing as how I’m not a: mother, lover of children, father, or romance novelist(?)… Also, Naruto’s probably trying to save his ass from his immaturity from the last page.

Then Hinata’s reaction is well… Naruto still get’s to her after all these years…. Awwwww…. It’s giving me a stomachache and a toothache. XP Don’t ask me what’s floating around behind her… maybe it’s a huge dust particle! 8O

By the way, I can’t draw hair for ANYONE anymore…

Thanks for reading… if you survived the ugliness!

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Naruto and Hinata © Masashi Kishimoto
Nudoru, Kichi, Narumi and this doujin © Moi